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Thursday, 22 November 2018

Writing, E-portfolio Sample, Term 4 2018

Writing, E-portfolio Sample - Reviews

  • Why is it important to plan before you write? It is important to plan before you write because you don't have to think
that much because all the ideas are already written down. Also it is really good to plan because you might forget an
idea so you can just look at the plan and the idea you forgot would be there.


 


  • What is the purpose of a topic sentence? The purpose of a topic sentence is so the reader has an idea of what you are
going to write about. Also it is to draw the reader in so they read the whole piece of writing.



  • What is your favourite part of your review?Why? My favourite part of  the review was probably the start because it has a lot of detail and it hooks the reader in. Another reason why I like the start is because it is a compound sentence which is one of the sentences we are working on.


  • What are at least three things a review can have?
1. Background information like where they are from etc
2. What event the athlete did and what place they came
3. What the athlete felt



Tuesday, 6 March 2018

Giving Quality Feedback



GIVING QUALITY FEEDBACK


WHY IS IT IMPORTANT TO COMMENT ON PEOPLES BLOGS?
It is important because people can improve when they do another blog post.
What is the FIRST step in giving feedback? The first step is to tell the blogger something you like for example I like how much detail you have.


Why is it important to follow this step (in green)? It is important to follow this step because you need to give the blogger some confidence so he/she can keep blogging and feel happy.

Do I have to use this every time? Yes I do.

What are the SECOND two options in giving feedback (both in orange)? The two options in orange is to ask the blogger a question and the second option was to give the blogger a positive suggestion, for example next time you should add more detail.

Why is it important to follow these steps? It is important to follow these steps because the blogger could improve in there learning.


Do I have to do both? No, I must choose between asking a question or giving the blogger a positive
suggestion.


WHY IS IT IMPORTANT TO GIVE QUALITY FEEDBACK? It is important to give quality feedback
because you could make the blogger improve their quality in their posts and they could learn more
from your feedback.